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overall i think your design is really cool, and i love the words insie the wind, but i would like it more if the city ran all the way around the shirt.
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it feels too heavy on top, and more like smoky than cloudy. Yup, if the city can be bigger. but good concept
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Love the top's billowy feel, just wish something about clouds or the midnight moon was the focal point and not the city below. Great cloud effects!
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I really like the clouds, but not the city. Maybe if you reworked the city to be as visually stunning as the clouds it would work better. I think the outline around the city kinda flattens it out.
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could've made "in the city" more a part of the skyline (maybe with lights)...didn't really notice it at first..nice work on the clouds though.
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For a detailed version of the illustration, look for the blog in my profile.