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Submitted on:
Dec 31 '08
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32 comments
Average score:
2.15 from 853 votes
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nice idea, needs better execution though.
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Arrow08 on Dec 31 '08 clever!
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mezo on Dec 31 '08 So clever, but I am not sold on the look. The text could be way betterererer. 3
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The hoodie is brilliant.
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neat
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Very clever but weak execution.
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cool idea.
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catalina aguilera on Jan 01 '09 yeah, good idea
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I'm not much for the design but I will stay on this page another 5 minutes just to zip and unzip back and forth on the flash app.
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i believe i $5'd this
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I love how you can read it column-by-column AND left-right!!!
But yeah, execution could be better... |
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 01 '09 Nice idea, really great that it can be read up, down, left right, inside out, backwards, etc. Zip up is great. It's just not something I'd wanna wear. But i gotta give it upfor the innovation.
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Hehe, I like the zipping animation. Nice idea--like the two phrases thing coming out to be the same idea. Sadly, it's not my kind of thing.
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Maybe an old English text for the "I do care" side and a gradient of some sort in the solid red half.
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But I really love the wordplay.
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I do care for this design just not enough!
3 + 1 for presentation = 4 |
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I like the concept, but it could be executed SO much better. For instance, the typography and the fitting inside the heart could be improved. Maybe you could also add some color options?
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Good idea. Well done if you ask me. I wouldn't wear it ever as it's not me, but still :)
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yea, this word play is super clever, i do like it, its just....kinda emo? i think if it was executed a little differently, maybe with a few more elements, it would be even better. but the wordplay is really nice
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i concur
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Great concept!
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i LOVE the way the words are placed so you can read it in more way than one
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Good idea, needs better style
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I would definitely love it if it were executed better. Resubmit and yo have my vote.
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that's a rippin' zip!
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Ivantobealone on Jan 05 '09 Love it!
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That model looks so happy....Great idea honey!
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It is kinda emo, though I love the concept. :) I see what you did there!
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theevidenceisme
theevidenceisme on Jan 05 '09 I would definitely love it if it were executed better. Resubmit and you have my vote. Ditto |
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very clever...pretty ugly
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staffell on Jan 11 '09 I'm not surprised on the wack score - I had to rush this to enter it in the JOT. Now I'm back I'll have a go at a different execution
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This is great, you should give it another try!
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staffell on Apr 27 '10 Thanks soloyo! Funnily enough, I've been brainstorming this idea for ages, but I can't successfully come up with two different phrases which fit together as one. Also, the theme has to be a little less depressing next time.
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