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Dec 30 '08
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kaloyster on Dec 30 '08 gun is too detailed, cat & mouse too cartoony.
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HorsefaceDee on Dec 30 '08 I agree with kaloyster but if reworked this will be great!!
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I don't think animals should be shot :(
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alexmdc on Dec 30 '08 it really sticks out on the darker shirt, I think you're on the right path
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gun is a little too detailed, the mice are awesome, and i think the lines on the cat are a bit too thick...
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make the bell more prominent , i agree with kayloster
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Yeah, I think I'd make the gun more cartoony to match the style of the rest of the shirt.
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Wow, this reminds me of something I started working on a couple months ago!
I do have to say that the gun being detailed with the animals being more "cartoony" seems a bit off, but I like the concept! |
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the man wearing the head band looks disgruntled...
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love the top on the dark grey colour but yeah the gun is a lil to detailed but the mice n cat r awsum
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I think there's a perry bible fellowship comic like this, the site's down though.
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The image doesn't flow well.
It's not because the gun has too much detail. It seems to be due to the gun not being done in the same style. It looks like you just took a piece of clip art and pasted into the picture. |
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Well, I did draw all the art in my design. My idea was to have the gun more detailed than the characters to emphasize the danger. But obviously that isn't pleasing many. I sure wish you had all chimed in on the critique section while this was there.
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Thanks, though, for all the comments.
Really. |
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i like this, guns dont kill cats mice kill cats
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 02 '09 The gun's style contrasts both the cat and mice, who again contrast each other's styles.
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i love it exactly the way it is and it looks great on the darker shirts maybe emphasize the shadow of the things on the shirt but i would buy. 5
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Yeah, gun v's cat/mice detail isn't working, sorry.
Loving the mice and their funny little poses, though. They're fantastic! (guns on tees just don't work for me, no matter the message) |
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please not on a darker shirt $5
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Ivantobealone on Jan 03 '09 Poor kitty! good job!
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Haha, really great! Nice composition! I esp. enjoy how the cat's tail frames the bottom of the shirt : -)
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nice!
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The gun doesn't quite look like it's as real as the cat.
Still, nice work. |
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great concept :)
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love it...but hate bottom placement!!!!nice work though!!!
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