Ambush

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Ambush by Francesa

Scoring finished:

325 days ago

Submitted on:

Dec 30 '08

Scored by:

798 people

Comments:

26 comments

Final average score:

2.06 out of 5

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by Francesa

Since the critiques, I added a bell on the mouse's tail who led the cat into the ambush. That's why I changed the name of the design.

kaloyster on Dec 30 '08

gun is too detailed, cat & mouse too cartoony.

HorsefaceDee on Dec 30 '08

I agree with kaloyster but if reworked this will be great!!

Malcolm Man on Dec 30 '08

I don't think animals should be shot :(

alexmdc on Dec 30 '08

it really sticks out on the darker shirt, I think you're on the right path

weerd_science on Dec 30 '08

gun is a little too detailed, the mice are awesome, and i think the lines on the cat are a bit too thick...

DesThrashX on Dec 30 '08

make the bell more prominent , i agree with kayloster

zomggeek on Dec 31 '08

Yeah, I think I'd make the gun more cartoony to match the style of the rest of the shirt.

bcrider on Dec 31 '08

Wow, this reminds me of something I started working on a couple months ago!

I do have to say that the gun being detailed with the animals being more "cartoony" seems a bit off, but I like the concept!

Jimmy79 on Dec 31 '08

the man wearing the head band looks disgruntled...

Blueyedtessa on Dec 31 '08

love the top on the dark grey colour but yeah the gun is a lil to detailed but the mice n cat r awsum

papervoice on Jan 01 '09

I think there's a perry bible fellowship comic like this, the site's down though.

Mr. Crunchy on Jan 01 '09

The image doesn't flow well.

It's not because the gun has too much detail. It seems to be due to the gun not being done in the same style.
It looks like you just took a piece of clip art and pasted into the picture.

Francesa on Jan 01 '09

Well, I did draw all the art in my design. My idea was to have the gun more detailed than the characters to emphasize the danger. But obviously that isn't pleasing many. I sure wish you had all chimed in on the critique section while this was there.

Francesa on Jan 01 '09

Thanks, though, for all the comments.
Really.

miko e on Jan 01 '09

i like this, guns dont kill cats mice kill cats

FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 02 '09

The gun's style contrasts both the cat and mice, who again contrast each other's styles.

inflatedsquirrel on Jan 03 '09

i love it exactly the way it is and it looks great on the darker shirts maybe emphasize the shadow of the things on the shirt but i would buy. 5

cgus on Jan 03 '09

Yeah, gun v's cat/mice detail isn't working, sorry.
Loving the mice and their funny little poses, though.
They're fantastic!
(guns on tees just don't work for me, no matter the message)