text can set you free
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1245 days ago
Submitted on:
Dec 29 '08
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Average score:
2.51 from 910 votes
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I remember seeing this in development, nice work, it looks really good on the tshirt and I love that last line!
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ginetteginette on Dec 29 '08 nice job, but shouldn't it be: "i'm off to live in the forest to eat berries"?
i'm not certain if that's any more correct technically but it reads better that way for me. |
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Well, I gave it a 5$ seeing as we're going steady now!
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It looks great on the shirt. Great job. 5
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LOL
This is even funnier because the typewriter looks so happy... and is saying "ILOVEU". :D |
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I completely missed the ILOVEU part.
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the forest is IN the world....I just don't get this...and I'm not a fan of tees that hava lots of words. Sorry.
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ginetteginette is right about the wording. otherwise i like this... the iloveu will be lost on most though
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Arrow08 on Dec 29 '08 Nice illo! Nice idea too
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very funny.
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ginetteginette on Dec 29 '08 i suppose for the people who are even more nitpicky than i am you could always change dear world to dear society...
but i don't think that's necessary. |
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Maybe if you shade the "ILOVEU" part slightly darker, or if you make the lettering in a copper foil/ other color it would stand out more.
I'm still giving this a 5$. |
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that typewriter is win!
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can i come too?
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I strongly agree with ginetteginette.
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smusi on Dec 30 '08 your grammar is just fine. you haven't decided to live in the forest just so you can eat berries. you are going to the forest and one of the things you will be doing there is eating berries. it describes two separate thoughts, not one. id est, you're good.
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HAHA.sg on Dec 30 '08 neat5!
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The text you're using in this version looks much better than the one I saw before. :) Very awesome. Turned out great!
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I think this should be a print! Congrats Mr. Spiers.
FIVE!!!! Hip, Hip, Horray!!!!!!!!!! |
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I love the typewriters happy face! Nice one dude! $5
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5$
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i agree with smusi...the grammar is fine!
looks great! :) |
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I'm with smusi too. The grammar expresses a clear thought just the way it is.
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yeohgh on Dec 30 '08 we LOVE U!!!! awesomeeeee!!!
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Very Thoreau. Sweet.
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haha sweet
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for some reason....muted colour tees have a very classy look...i like it!
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This looks amazing :D $5 anytime.
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Grammar reads fine to me as is. The message certainly gets across.
Pretty funny and the illo style works great with the whole thing. $$ |
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I like this as a message, but I wouldn't wear it. Sorry :(
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I love it!
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my my a bit bitter to the world arent we.
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Good typewriter....5
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ha sweet
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TangYauHoong on Jan 02 '09 Cool, man!
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 02 '09 I don't like the final thought on it, i would go more to the effect of I'm gonna do what i want or I'm gonna make my own world inside of yours or make your world better and more full of life instead of giving up and moving away. Other than that, an interesting tee and a great typewriter styling. I agree, i enjoy it's smiling snotty face looking at me.
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I love it all! It is cute! And I like the Ending very much I would wear it for sure!
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Nice! (:
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LUUUUVE it!
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Ivantobealone on Jan 03 '09 My sentiments exactly, huuuge 5
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ivejustquitsmoking on Jan 03 '09 :)
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Thoreau might dig this if he was into buying clothes :)
Love the last line! |
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i often declare i'm off to live in the woods after a rant against the world...
so yeah - my brain needs this tee! |
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HorsefaceDee on Jan 04 '09 Fun concept!
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f**k the grammar, you're off to live in the forest where you'll probably eat the wrong berries or get eaten by a bear. Grammar isn't as important as survival now!
I wish you luck. Be free and run naked!! |
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sweet drawing, the message in the keys is a nice touch.
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very nice. looks good on the shirt.
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nice score man! expected it to be higher though!
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badbasilisk on Jan 07 '09 oh man - i missed scoring - but a 5$ from me ;-)
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Ivantobealone on Jan 07 '09 Congrats on the score!
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i like how you changed the QWERTY format of the keyboard to say "ILOVEU." very cute.
but man, typing on that thing would screw. me. up. |
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