Cry me a riv... waterfall!
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Dec 16 '08
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alexmdc on Dec 16 '08 nice Im diggin the flow of the design
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i like it, the problem for me, though, is that the waterfall is not the same scale as a tear would be, geddit? i think if it were this would be more interesting.
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Nice, very intuitive. Maybe make eye a different color to contrast with water? And maybe more than just one waterfall; like have two smaller streams coming from different corners of the eye, in addition to the one you already have. Or, maybe even mess with the colors a little to add the shock element to the design; make the water an unexpected color like purple, but draw in a way so that it's still recognizable as a waterfall.
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WHAT this is insanely awesome
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ratkiss on Dec 17 '08 Nice!
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holy crap that's cool, but i wouldn't wear an eye on my shirt. 5.
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i think you should have done it so the waterfall came from the right side of the eye and curved left like a tear would on a face, but this is still nicely done
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whats the deal w/ the santa hats?
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Santa hats?
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The birds do look like santa hats.
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yeah, I'l post a link to a higher res pic.
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Nice! The only thing I'd change would be the bird sitting on the rock in the waterfall. He's kind of distracting. Otherwise it's a great design.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 19 '08 There's plenty of good idead for improvements to this one, with prexis's and the two smaller streams being the best. It needs to take up more of the shirt and maybe be on a green tee and have some more trees and vegetation. It's a great concept and a good drawing waiting for a few changes to become amazing. Good luck with it and i hope to see an improved version soon!
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Uploaded it on the critique-section, unfortunatley it wasn't so many comments there.
Thansk for posting, I will look into it :) |
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i like it
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i reaaaaallly like this one and i agree with what other people have said like having the tear come with the inner corner of the eye like a normal tear would, have the river keep going off the shirt, and i woud like to see some facial defenition and not just a floating eye. good idea though :)
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i reaaaaallly like this one and i agree with what other people have said like having the tear come with the inner corner of the eye like a normal tear would, have the river keep going off the shirt, and i woud like to see some facial defenition and not just a floating eye. good idea though :)
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woops, sorry
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crying a river
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