This is a refined abstracted sketch from a few years ago. I just love the flow of this. The whole design would wrap around on to the back of the shirt as well.
tone on tone is a good suggestion. or a few lines in a contrasting colour. I would definitely like to see it just a TOUCH more in the 'eyesore' direction (because right now I would say it is a TOUCH too much in the 'boring' direction.. but only a touch!)
Thanks for the in depth crit lackofname. Good suggestions. Im working on another that is a somewhat similar style to this and I might kick some subtle tone changes or maybe some color in there.
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