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it's for the horror contest so yeah it makes sense with the graveyard reference. Kind of reminds me of the Evil Dead. Nice.
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I'd swap the cross with a gravestone and ditchthe background since it confuses the foreground image, or at least raise it up a bit.
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scented my hair in hope,
and through this darkness skeleton hands grasp,
clutching at the midnight air,
angled always in the musical magic of thunder."