I like just the robot. No cityscape

Your illustration style reminds me off www.mrjago.com

This is very , very fresh , and i would buy this without a doubt.

Yeah the robot is mean! Ditch the scape. Peace

Love the robot! This is my fav out of all the characters you submitted!

top notch character, no scape would be better

I wish i could see some of your illustration outside of robots and urban landscapes.

It's already getting somewhat monotonous.

i think you're fabulous
don't change a wink

Jawa, keep 'em coming. This is one of my favorites from your series. Love the cityscape.
If they ever print one of your designs, I'll have to purchase a paper print (are they still offering that, I haven't read the fine print in a while) - this would look ill framed in my living room. - j

i like the style, very futura/unkle. (maybe a bit too much?)

this i think would work as a print, but for a tee shirt i think the cityscape needs to link/work better with the character.
maybe incorporate the characters style of drawing in some parts of the city, possibly a vechicle or lampost... i dunno i just think it looks like two seperate items at the moment.

Like he says. ^ The urban monster doesn't need the city.

much better, your designs are improving i must say

Really like this one. Am I the only one who thinks the cityscape should stay?

> Vulnus - or the city doesn't need the urban monster. Skip the monster and add something to the cityscape?

The contrast in in style from the background to the foreground is clearly intentional. Not only does this give the piece balance, but it makes the character stand apart. Not to mention that losing the monster would take away the originality that jawa has established for himself. He's one of the few cats whose work I can recognize on sight. Sometimes this means the artist needs to broaden his/her horizons, but I don't think that's the case here.

it is vaccuming??
who cares? i like it alot
5

I love it!

It’s perfect.

Reminds me of the Infesticons (not the style, but the subject matter, if that makes any sense :P)

I absolutely love this type of design excellent!!!
X5

i like just the robot, id buy that centered

reminds me of that quanum (sp?) clip

Totally agree with jbyron, both the robot and the landscape compliment each other...
Losing one of them would lose the complexity of the design.
Shweeet.

In style it's very similar to a lot of the Shynola collective's work, not a bad thing. If you feel the need to have both the figure & the cityscape I'd shrink down the latter & set the robot to the right of it. In the current design where they overlap it is a touch noisy.

i think they need to overlap to interact. they arent really noisey because the cityscape is simplified to two block lines on the right.

if they were seperate then it would look silly. billy.

Looks great!

itd be badass if you just had the robot in white centered on a black tee

good work

love it just the way it is.

keep the entire design but make it smaller

nice work. mutidimensional.

like a logo, even if theres some fault in it like not being totally ground breaking/original ones, we'll get use to it after awhile.. does it mean its good because its recognisable? some might say..

evolution will be goodfor your works.

a good blend with the vector buildings here, but should make them smaller..

i still think this isnt complete.. maybe its the colors.

everyone one of these shirts i see of yours have the robots or whatever in the same stance and position. i want to see them doing something else. other than that, you have some good ish going on...

are u shure u are not futura???

juz a question not a suggestion...
what if you cut away the city where the character is? leaving bits of the city still visible on the right
this might still leave the impression that the character is in the foregrd city in back
character still stands out.
only bad thing is no overlap > possibly detracts from your style/opinions?
would that help or destroy your artwork?

i think transmute said something interesting... adding more objects in the same style could be fun? except maybe the character is less the focal point...

and Mr. Mike is probably drawn more to the contrast between gray shirt and white fill than green character
so i would read that he sees it as the filled buildings are too obvious not to notice and the unfilled character he does not notice as much...

i haven't said anything mean at all!

i hope this helps....

thanks knives. i have done a shirt for the new submissions that takes in a few of the things you ahve mentioned.
let me know what you think when it comes out.

re: benny breaks. new stance and ideas coming following week. cheers.

i think the design is killer, i would leave the cityscape in as well but alter it slightly. right now it kind of dominates the composition and makes the figure a secondary item.

knivesout had a good idea with knocking the figure out of the background. i might also try sizing the background down quite a bit and making a longer cityscape that is much skinnier... does that make sense? like instead of having three buildings maybe have a long landscape of twenty or so tiny ones with electrical lines and stuff going all over. anyway i think im starting to babble a bit so ill leave it at that.

again, killer killer shirt.

wtf is this, i miss the round thats jam-packed with FREAKING AWESOME designs. sh;t. you would have gotten a xbuy and 5 from me, had i been there.

this si cool
love how quirky the robot is