It's not that bad. It's just confusing in its execution/concept. I can't work out what the pink thing on the right is. The perspective is off, the linework a little inconsistent and the mechanics don't make a whole lot of sense.
Keep on trucking, though. You can only get better.
As far as the linework goes i was trying to make it look rough. the idea is that a rough block of stuff goes in and out comes a smoother finished product, love. i have cleaner versions witg more accurate shading and perspective but i liked the rougher look, hence the sketchy linework. ill keep trying!
As far as the linework goes i was trying to make it look rough. the idea is that a rough block of stuff goes in and out comes a smoother finished product, love. i have cleaner versions witg more accurate shading and perspective but i liked the rougher look, hence the sketchy linework. ill keep trying!
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