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Cool, good message. I don't know if the text is really needed but overall I like it. I think I'd go with the white.
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I would use a clean sans-serif font for this, and the lime green strokes just take away from it, change the colour of those.
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i love the concept, but not so much the text. maybe if it wasn't so cheesy. if you REALLY want to keep the text, i'm get rid of the exclamation and draw the letters.
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I'd cut the text, otherwise it looks like a t-shirt for some sort of school fundraiser, or the freebie you get at one of those global awareness functions
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If it didn't have the text it would just be a lame version of Tree Town but. I don't think it's good enough for a resubmit.
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please don't submit it again without the text. it's a very played out image. if you really have to re-submit it, put it into critiques first.
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