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yea your going to have to do something more radical the figure and the composure is alright but you need a diff element.
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like previous comments on previous versions of this , it has been done a million times ..guy with gun.....find some original subject matter
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actually that sounds a bit rude..not meant that way at all . just draw something that means something to you ..thats the first step to creating something fresh and exciting
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Improve: Cut off looks really awkward, text is unreadable. Overall just looks thrown together without much thought.