i knew what the text said because it's a well known slogan but i had to go looking for the 'on the' part for too long awhile, doesn't seem to read in the right order. it's pretty nice though otherwise.
Yup, my comment was gonna be about the "on the" being a bit hard to spot. but everything else about this one is spot on, such a different way at looking at all of these objects.
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