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I agree about the expressions. Yeti looks scared and Bigfoot looks angry.
Good idea, though. I would make them both look shocked/scared/surprised and maybe take out the text. |
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ditto the comments above.
redrawn with 2 equally surprised characters and no or handwritten text would make this a winner. The idea and style are fantastic, just needs a small tweak! 4! |
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Thumbs down on the text. Thumbs up on the cartoons. Thumbs down on the expression of bigfoot.
This can be changed to be a great shirt though. |
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I think you could do without the text; the story's already communicated in the poses of the monsters. Very fun :)
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this reminds me of that m&m commercial.
when m&m's meat santa - yellow m&m: "he does exist!" santa: "they do exist!" and they both faint. |
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So cute. Maybe on a softer color, like brown, but either way, it is terribly cute. Maybe after this one you can do another shirt with Santa and the Tooth Fairy and the same concept.
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