|
Cool idea. Text seems... too much? Something simpler like "Right hand: Red" might convey the same message without saying it so obviously.
|
|
cool idea, looks just like the background on Stephen King.
And yeah, the words are big and too many. Other than that it's great tho. |
|
text is optional and on thought could equally go on the back of the T-shirt so its more like a teaser, thanks for your comments to date!
|
|
I agree with the text thing too, but FrickenAwesome has just lifted your idea to a whole other level.
|
|
No, no, no. The spinner idea is overwrought. No need to force feed the audience. This design is pleasing as is, even if a bit gimmicky. I dig it. : )
|
About my design
this design was inspired by signs, information graphics, maps, colour coding etc important details in anyones travel plans, in colour coding the map I began to realise that it resembled a huge global twister board and what better metaphor to describe the way we hop, skip, jump , stretch and flop from country to country on a global scale!
the design is set up for a 5-colour print and I think it would be most arresting on a dark pallette.
Any comments positive or negative are as always greatly appreciated.