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it's nice but a bit too heavy with the black, the sharp cutoff at the bottom of the mountain is pulling my attention away from the rest of the image.
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It's not immediately apparent that the mountain is shattering. Less 'crack' lines with one that travelled down from the flag before branching off, would give it more impact. Great idea though.
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About my design
Apparently, this is not a good move...