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"The Way The Sun Hits Her"

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SleepyDesigner

About my design

by SleepyDesigner
The beauty of girls and swirls.

Amazing.

Indoors, viewers will see the elegant stroke of a girl with the glint of sun rays.

As you step outdoors, allowing the sun to envelop her, they will be able to see her true beauty.

First submission.

Show some love.



"Aim For The Soul."
Candy Man
Candy Man on Oct 16 '08
That's a really neat idea.



If you have a minute, here's mine.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30102/Candy_Cotton_Field
__isthenewblack.
__isthenewblack. on Oct 16 '08
Nice, I personally would like to see more color, though.
Tofeeno.
Tofeeno. on Oct 17 '08
i really like the idea alot, but if there was any way to sort of...solidify her more than i would definitely consider it... From even a short distance away it may just look like random lines.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30222/The_Gentle_Giant_Lives



SleepyDesigner
SleepyDesigner on Oct 17 '08
That was kind of the point?

It's one of those things to be like, "Oh, it's a nice design." then with careful examination, "OHHHH! There's a girl!"

So yeah...?
Fleck
   Fleck on Oct 17 '08
1MIKO
1MIKO on Oct 17 '08
Wow!

Cool!

5$
StotheSteger
StotheSteger on Oct 17 '08
Looks nice but i think it needs more of an organic element or style to it. The way the flourishes curve seem a bit too uniform. thanks for your feedback by the way!
Dizza
Dizza on Oct 19 '08
Wow. I love the design (always been a fan of swirls) and I love the concept. i definetly want it!!!
love.my.converse
love.my.converse on Oct 19 '08
really pretty...shirts with swirls ans stuff are my favorite...5$
scotties123
scotties123 on Oct 19 '08
http://www.uneetee.com/category/productInfo.asp?idx=138
SleepyDesigner
SleepyDesigner on Oct 19 '08
WTF!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?



Dammmmm.
scotties123
scotties123 on Oct 19 '08
ya hate to break it to u. ive been following ur design since critiques was lookin forward to buying it. just came across that other shirt earlier today, thought i should warn you.
SleepyDesigner
SleepyDesigner on Oct 19 '08
Dammm...

Thanks man.

Well, its a more simplistic and easier on the eyes I guess.

But the concept is the same. :/
lawlita
lawlita on Oct 20 '08
Conceptually I think you executed the idea better. ;/ xx
SleepyDesigner
SleepyDesigner on Oct 20 '08
:D!!!!!

Thanks!
jenraskopf
jenraskopf on Oct 20 '08
I think that yours is by far different enough. I think that you are using a technology that their tee isn't, w;hich is changing the concept. They drew a girl with swirly hair, you drew a girl brought to life by the sun.

I also think yours is more attractive.

Hang in there!
jenraskopf
jenraskopf on Oct 20 '08
Secret semicolon insert only shows how serious I am!
SleepyDesigner
SleepyDesigner on Oct 20 '08
Thanks for the encouragement jenraskopf :)
lucyisaturtle
lucyisaturtle on Oct 22 '08
do you think people steal ideas from threadless and vice versa, or maybe its like on waking life when once an idea is out there. other people can lock into it.

Anyhoo, i like you design, id like to see it on a coloured tee, like yellow?

Can you check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30160/face_off
spinninghead
spinninghead on Oct 23 '08
For some reason this reminds me of John Nash's tie in "A Beautiful Mind" (the movie starring Russell Crowe). The patterns, I guess, are what are doing it.



I like it!
Spieliewielie
Spieliewielie on Oct 23 '08
I like it. It's not something I would buy cause it's not my type of design. But that's really personal. Something can be really nice, but not to my taste to wear it. Concept is cool. I like it when people use a technique that's suits their concept and not just because it's just a cool technique.



btw don't botter about that other deisgn. First of all it''s not on Threadless and second of all, like jenraskopf said, it's different enough to distinguish from it.



Thanks for your comment btw and the ninja will come!
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Keply119
Keply119 on Jan 02 '09
cool concept and it is well executed.
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