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ONE STEP TO PARADISE

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by blacklabel
ALL IT TAKES IS ONLY ONE STEP TO PARADISE, NOW THIS IS WHAT I CALL TRAVELING IN STYLE LOL WIND IN YOUR HAIR, CLOUDS AT YOUR FEET. SIMULATED PROCESS, MAYBE UV INK ON THE SUN OR ITS RAYS, ENJOY EVERYONE
NewAnimus
NewAnimus on Oct 15 '08
I would love it if the yellow were a little... different? I guess I'm just not feeling the yellow color.



Otherwise, this is great!
wolveshands
wolveshands on Oct 15 '08
is this that show with Michale Landon?
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Oct 15 '08
can a guy really cast a shadow on something that is emitting light?
GrosPlante
GrosPlante on Oct 15 '08
Sweet composition & great placement!
blacklabel
blacklabel on Oct 15 '08
can you really walk on light? surreal composition thought it also needed a earthly grounding element, which i used his shadow as
blacklabel
blacklabel on Oct 15 '08
thanks everyone for your comments feel free to post links of your designs here with a comment
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Oct 16 '08
GG, i think you're being a wee biot hard on this abstract interpretation. lol. I really like the idea and placement here, such a sweet vision. I'd like to see the character colored in and the rays of light reach to the top of the tee.



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ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Oct 16 '08
i might not have said anything about it if the shadow wasn't such a huge distraction, but it begs to be looked at and is pretty much the focal point my eye rests on -which annoyed me extra.



if anything i think it needs to be toned down.
blacklabel
blacklabel on Oct 16 '08
you might be right a tone down of the shadow might have the same effect with less distraction, well if printed its an easy remedy, its kinda cool they let us do that dont you think, letting us add updated changes if its to be printed based on everyones suggestions
jumpy410
jumpy410 on Oct 17 '08
i think tone the shadow down a shade but i love the concept
JilliWarb
JilliWarb on Oct 18 '08
I really like your design. Maybe even printed on a black t so that your colors stand out more vibrant!?
love.my.converse
love.my.converse on Oct 19 '08
it's really pretty and i like it on the blue shirt better
el nen vudu
el nen vudu on Oct 20 '08
COOL!

IF YOU HAVE A SECOND PLEASE SEE MY TEES:



http://www.threadless.com/submission/182114/when_I_was_a_child_I_thought_on_flying_cars



http://www.threadless.com/submission/182194/Trick_or_treat
lithcarrie
lithcarrie on Oct 20 '08
I like it on the blue shirt better and would like to see what it looks like on a green shirt as well. . . . kelly green maybe.
sydney_laurel
sydney_laurel on Oct 22 '08
i like the blue shirt cause it lets all the colors show well!
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