it's too boxy.
you need to find a way to make the sun rays either extend, or fade out, or something, otherwise it looks like you just threw it on there, after making ti for something else.
Otherwise, i'm a fan of the art, especially the sun and water,
ive gotten it looks like the art from final fantasy but never pokemon lol tetsua nomura is my idol
also i wanted the reminicint look of a incan style to the always look like block prints very angular edges to the designs
okay if by chance its chosen to print ill redo th sun to look like the style of the wind ill put up a critique showing the changed style will post it tomorrow morning
belt printed or other appropriate process, with UV ink option for the son if doable, enjoy