you need to find a way to make the sun rays either extend, or fade out, or something, otherwise it looks like you just threw it on there, after making ti for something else.
Otherwise, i'm a fan of the art, especially the sun and water,
okay if by chance its chosen to print ill redo th sun to look like the style of the wind ill put up a critique showing the changed style will post it tomorrow morning
About my design
belt printed or other appropriate process, with UV ink option for the son if doable, enjoy