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Oct 13 '08
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theleliamonster

About my design

by theleliamonster
For the Loves Travel contest. I think it'd be neato to have the planes and dotted lines in puffy paint. Thanks for comments, crits, and votes!
evanleggoe
evanleggoe on Oct 13 '08
i like it, but i feel like it's missing something.

definitely blue jean
Jimjams
Jimjams on Oct 13 '08
What about the other half of the planet? could you put that on the back?

poor old new zealand always misses out.
Dragonjest22
Dragonjest22 on Oct 13 '08
Gotta be blue.
Mook-e
Mook-e on Oct 13 '08
Yeh I think Australia, NZ, Indonesia etc... is what's missing. But I like the general idea. Prefer the sand colour.
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Oct 14 '08
it feels like it's missing a concept and style - and that stuff means a lot.
lankybadger
lankybadger on Oct 14 '08
that comment seems a little harsh...



i like it, but the image looks a bit big for me, could be slightly higher on the shirt. and continuing on the back is a great idea.
theleliamonster
theleliamonster on Oct 14 '08
@ Jimjams and Mook-e: I actually did have a version with the other side of the world on the back, but one of my submissions was turned down for "too much stuff," so I guess I got cold feet on this. Thanks for your comments!
theleliamonster
theleliamonster on Oct 14 '08
@ ginetteginette: I'm sorry, the concept is travel, the style is just really simple at this point; it's my first submission, give me a break. Be a little more constructive, please... if you're going to criticize, at least leave something I can work with.
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