this is part of a ten shirt series.
depending on the feedback i may bump it up to twelve or thirteen.
- H4

ace...

Heh, it's really sloppy and cliché. You have repeating circles, drips, pluses, and barcodes..not to mention a skull. I'm not saying that it's horendous, but for one, you're relying on these cliché elements to make a Tshirt and the problem with that is that there is a dearth of focus because of it. Nothing stands out. Another thing is that if you're going to use cliché elements, then try and make them look at least neat. Your pluses are lopsided, as are your drips and circles. The entire thing seems to have been done in paint, really. Not to mention there's a square chunk missing from the cloud.

I haven't seen the rest of your series so i cant critique on them, but just try to 1) not rely so much on easily accessible elements and 2) try to make the overall presentation more professional. And if you're trying to make it seem underground and sloppy, trust me, there's still a professional way to make it look underground and sloppy. ;p

i'm sorry

I think the whole series should be pushed back until we understand the fundamentals of the first. nice drips, so controlled they really 'fit in' . ...better watch it they allmost went right off the shirt.

Hey, I like this!

dont like the color scheme all that much

what the fuck is that ?

its reall sloppy

HAHAHAHAHA i laugh so hard at this... I hope this guy is kidding... it would make a good joke

bad design first of all.

second, bright red, and bright blue, just clash like all hell. disgusting.

ugh.










no.

i' ve seen all those designs all ready and they are played out, and blue and red eat away the eyes. its ok though

PLAYED and totally shitty... did this take 2 seconds in your Draw program buddy? I'd love to be more constructive but this is just lost.

This seems like a parody to me.

what the?

hahahahahaha - i cant believe you talked shit about my design - you got the zero returned, only you actually deserved it.

He he! How can u possibly make twelve more shirts? You've used all the clichés on this one.

maybe instead this shirt could be part 1 of a 1 part series...i like that idea better

No. Even most shirts that use the cliché images use them a hell of a lot better than this. This is just lazy.

Even if this was a great shirt and they printed it, you still couldn't get them to print 9 more in a series. I t just doesn't work like that.

I smell troll!

This is a fiver .. I want my horse to wear it!!! He eats a good design when he smells one!

nice one herm, maybe you sould reads some comics and get 1/2 and idea about design!

C'mon guys, I think you're being too hard on him. I mean, how can you resist with all that "dj music coming at you". Besides, that's just how we rolled in 1988. -A thousand times ZERO (and if you think I'm slamming you just because you ripped on my shirt, well, you're right. But this still stinks. And Herman is a really weak name.)

Poor Poor Herman telling everyone how everyone elses designs have nothing on his and then I discover this is the great design hes been bragging about. Poor Poor Herman

Don't you that red and blue just don't go together?
So next time you decide to be mean to someone else (like mine, which was just an experiment to see if it would go through) you should take your into account, as well.

Am I the only one who got the joke?

We are all asshole snobs, so probably yeah.

This is great, but I think H4 would rather you not get the joke and just stay pissed.

H4, this is new, the comments keep coming even thou the design is over and scored. It must be bad to get this responce or maybe people dont like your comments? Shit design by the way.

I'm assuming this is a joke. It could use some birds and broken hearts.

"This seems like a parody to me. "

ooh, we've got a clever one here.

pity the same can't be said for you, herman.

get a life, you loser--congratulations, people like you sabotage threadless.

and i don't mean your design, which is almost even funny, but rather your insipid, inane and repetitive criticism of others' work.

mwah!

well said