Alone Together
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Sep 29 '08
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1.05 from 354 votes
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pothead.
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ooh shut up bangxbang
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damn straight...
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stoner.
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The design itself could work but the text isnt right I dont think. Its a bit depressing for most people. If you were humanising the cigs, then one could say to the other something like, 'Damn, baby. Your smokin' ' or something like that. I dont know, something else could work.
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awwwww
I tend to agree that the text/font isn't quite right somehow. I really like the ashtray though, for some reason. |
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Alone Together is my clothing line. They are not talking to each other.. Its a play on words.. Alone together, its like a contradiction, how can you be alone... together?
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its about the two people you dont see that the joints belong to. THEY are 'alone together'...
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This concept isn't working. There must be less ambiguous ways of illustrating the concept of being alone together. But it has to make sense straight away. A tee is not a book and it doesnt have a beginning a middle and an end. You cant expect people to magically know that its about mysterious people that are NOT in the image.
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its sort of implied.. i guess its for those who like second reads, not just something obvious. thanx for the advice tho...
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its like one of those things you may 'get' later, like, "yeah I get it now!"
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