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Tongue Twister (US version)

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Sep 22 '08
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2.37 from 1,004 votes
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The US version of my Red Lorry sub.
Laser Bread
   Laser Bread on Sep 22 '08
gorgeous typography
karmalaundry
karmalaundry on Sep 22 '08
awesome, looks great!
pats2fat
pats2fat on Sep 22 '08
i liked the lorry better, but this one is great. and easier for us yanks to understand.
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Sep 22 '08
yeah, i'm canadian and i like the word lorry better too but this is just as amazingly well done.
averyoiselet
averyoiselet on Sep 22 '08
How'd you get the words to look like that?

What process did you use?

(I'm typographically/technologically illiterate).

I love it by the way.
shakethesheets
shakethesheets on Sep 22 '08
I don't "get" either, but they both look great. I especially like the integration here with the "e"
Aphte
   Aphte on Sep 22 '08
Great and great ! (and I don't even know the word "lorry", so I kind of prefer this one !)
CuteTeezRule
CuteTeezRule on Sep 22 '08
It doesn't work as well as a tongue twister. Uk-er here so much prefer the lorry version.
Maltzmania
Maltzmania on Sep 22 '08
cool!
fatheed
   fatheed on Sep 22 '08
Want the original, but this still gets 5. Love it.
chelly
chelly on Sep 22 '08
both are grand
funkie fresh
   funkie fresh on Sep 22 '08
great type treatment and great colours
atomic child
atomic child on Sep 22 '08
sweet
Gar0
   Gar0 on Sep 23 '08
Thanks
dschwen
   dschwen on Sep 23 '08
$5 and PRint.
phones
phones on Sep 23 '08
hmmm not sure which version i prefer?
Anushka 2
Anushka 2 on Sep 23 '08
Quality!
strangelittlefaerie
strangelittlefaerie on Sep 23 '08
This is a clever - if not too literal - visual play on a classic tongue twister. Nice!
NotJustAPoeticFace
NotJustAPoeticFace on Sep 23 '08
I really love this!! I was hoping you'd do a 'leather' one so all our lovely American friends wouldn't stop this from getting printed!



I'd totally buy both the lorry one and this one (but first I'd spend hours practising the tongue twisters so that when people made a remark about my shirt I could wow them with my awesomeness/the fact that I have way too much free time).
Mountain Gnome
Mountain Gnome on Sep 23 '08
Just as good as the UK version, actually I think I like how this one looks better. 5!
nonolarson
   nonolarson on Sep 23 '08
I'm French so I don't care if it's lorry or leather, this is just a really cool typo !
zenbolic vision
zenbolic vision on Sep 23 '08
its amazzzing and hwo its look so damn real as texure like it paper fold is mysterious if its vector love it! 5 5555 :)
zenbolic vision
zenbolic vision on Sep 23 '08
should had it on brow too given it sexier vintage poping look!
coatkneedee
coatkneedee on Sep 23 '08
THEATRE KID SHIRT!
Luke...
   Luke... on Sep 24 '08
the textural quality of the textual shirt is pure texty...

:)
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Sep 24 '08
toy boat is my favorites tongue twister, but i say god-damn this is like heaven on a tee!
bektravels
bektravels on Sep 24 '08
I'd take either version $5
Gar0
   Gar0 on Sep 24 '08
Thanks.
nikolina100
nikolina100 on Sep 24 '08
wohooooooo, so good!
kooky love
   kooky love on Sep 24 '08
GREAT $5
i know very little about art
   i know very little about art on Sep 25 '08
Yes!!!
Simple Art
Simple Art on Sep 25 '08
Lovely design.
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Sep 25 '08
I'd prefer the first version even though I'm from the third world and any reference that comes with it is lost. But both is still visually stimulating and great graphic that I'd score this nothing less than the the first one.
Raid71
   Raid71 on Sep 25 '08
Love both versions
onaricegurl
onaricegurl on Sep 25 '08
eye catching!
Mr Genious
Mr Genious on Sep 25 '08
just repeating a word over and over again doesn't make for a good design. it's also not a tongue twister. tongue twisters are things like "Peter picked a patch of picked peppers"
Gar0
   Gar0 on Sep 25 '08
^ These comments seem more complete now. Thanks Mr Genious.
Montro
   Montro on Sep 25 '08
Beautifully rendered!
eskimokiss
   eskimokiss on Sep 25 '08
v.nice type work!
steven218
   steven218 on Sep 25 '08
this version is cool too, nice one man
steven218
   steven218 on Sep 25 '08
mr genious, stop picking holes and being a cock.
eskimokiss
   eskimokiss on Sep 25 '08
oh, and i think it works best on the dark brown tee.
lunchboxbrain
lunchboxbrain on Sep 25 '08
great type tee. 5
yoshi andrian
   yoshi andrian on Sep 25 '08
wow! really great typo.. looks great on tee. 5$
producer
producer on Sep 25 '08
clever leather

$5
alexandre.mess
alexandre.mess on Sep 25 '08
YES, YES, YES!! 5!
prismac
prismac on Sep 25 '08
awesome! I'd definitely buy it.
thINK
   thINK on Sep 26 '08
greatness
Jellyes
   Jellyes on Sep 26 '08
sweet!
iamcoolio
iamcoolio on Sep 26 '08
damn strait

nice



flealicious
flealicious on Sep 27 '08
Neat, man.
Gar0
   Gar0 on Sep 28 '08
Thanks for support.
lawrence loh
   lawrence loh on Sep 28 '08
great crafting on the text!
Raphe10
Raphe10 on Sep 28 '08
leather = death of innocent cow
regirilo
regirilo on Sep 28 '08
ahhh i love it. i was practicing that the other day!

lellow leather was most common.

=] i'd buy it.
nielquisaba
   nielquisaba on Sep 29 '08
wow!!! 5$
Gar0
   Gar0 on Sep 29 '08
Cheers
26 days later
ladrones
   ladrones on Oct 25 '08
very nice
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