Ahh... I've figured out somethings wrong with the queen's sketchy face, so here goes other sketchy faces option that I think that might be more suitable for her: Navyl & Brown
There's something very old-school Flying Mouse about this, in a really good way. Looks great on the darker or charcoal tee, i like the idea of some red foil a whole bunch. Nice work man!
Great style and idea - only snag I have is the red graffiti doesn't stand out enough - it either needs to be thicker or a different colour. And it looks better on a brown background, rather than blue.