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Yeah, I know what you're saying. I almost went with 'Top Banana', but maybe the text just needs to be more 'Hand drawn'...?
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I think if the text was hand drawn it would look better. Right now it just seems like a separate part instead of printing on the van itself.
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Yes, re-do or lose the text! Problem is not the font, but that it doesn't bend with the bus. Otherwise looks great, would buy in a flash!
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Agreed - the text seems to stick out the more I look at it - it doesn't look seamless...
Great design though |
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Mmm. I think I'll revisit the sign writing on the van element of the design! Great to get the feedback though and it's given me the encouragement to submit other designs... thanks.
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Top design!! (Maybe even include the bananas off to the side - around the back of the shirt. Just a thought...)
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About my design
I've spent many a hour doodling v-dubs (amongst other stuff) and that's how this one started.
I'm counting five print colors and plenty of bananas.