it's alright, but the concept has been really over done in this comp. the easiest ideas were to draw someone dreaming about drawing or draw a drawing coming to life. i'm a bit sick from the cheesiness of it.
i like the way the girl's face looks though but the whole thing seems unfinished and not quite original enough.
ps. just saw your first draft on your flickr and i like that one a ton more.
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