I'm not a huge fan of hard tor ead text based designs. Its not especially hard to read at this size, when I know what it says, but I imagine had I just seen it on someone on the street it would look like some random lines and shapes.
Dont, however, get me wrong, as I think the negative space usage is pretty good, but the shapes and whatnot, surrounding it, seem arbitrary and not nearly as well thought out, so they dont lend to the form of the type.
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