This one drew itself with a black marker.

i think that if you took it in to adobe illustrator and applied "comic art" to it, thinkened that lines and made it a vector image it would do good. Also if tou added COLOR and PAtterns. but because it is the way it is now i'll give you a 3 for its potential :-D

i like it .... in part i agree with robot blinky .... but still i like it the way it is .... :D

little guy trapped in the pocket is clutch.

Thanks for the comments and advice. robot blinky- I'm going to try that comic art thing, thanks!