Sometime your best isn't good enough
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Sep 10 '08
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1.92 from 1,049 votes
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platinum on Sep 10 '08 A typographic experiment I did using different hand drawn fonts.
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so true.
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The "T" in "sometimes" took me a while to get since I haven't read the title before viewing. I thought it was a "V." Anyway, I still like this.
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olie! on Sep 11 '08 I would really like this if the colors were a bit more vibrant
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gumbolimbo on Sep 11 '08 I agree with olie. Liking your typographic designs a lot though. keep them coming. You'll likely have one printed in the future.
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HAHA.sg on Sep 11 '08 ADORE YOUR STYLE!
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Aphte on Sep 11 '08 Yes more vibrant colors and it would be perfect !
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dschwen on Sep 11 '08 P
R I N T Please! $5 |
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Tonteau on Sep 11 '08 Hey carson, I dig your stuff and I think the colours on this are perfect.
However, I think you would benefit from keeping the typography more consistent in style, rather than changing the type for every word. Peace. |
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I like it :) Its a bit too emotional for me though. Whatever I still likes it!
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a slight increase in contrast would make this a 5 for me.
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More vibrant colors/contrast would be lovely.
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platinum on Sep 11 '08 I actually had really vibrant colours for this to begin with, but I figured given the mood of the message, a more faded worn-out look would work better. check out the other version here:
vibrant version |
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Awesome! I like the muted look of color.
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Yeah I like the muted version better. I agree it does a good job of reflecting the mood.
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The lettering is wonderful, and I actually quite like the fact that the colours aren't so vibrant - I think they look great on that shirt colour!
Isn't it...er, a little depressing though? |
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the "good" really bothers me
it looks like the letters are shrinking like they;re falling off an imaginary line |
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I think it's great!! $5
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I really like the sad face on the 'o'.
I'm torn between the vibrant and dark colors though. 5. |
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maybe make the "T" alittle bigger, or more clear? But I like : )
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All your design are awesome!
Nice Text You Have There. |
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the colors more bright please!
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colors are perfect -- DON'T change!
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yayy
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i know very little about art on Sep 14 '08 This is nice
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I love your style but I'm pretty bored by the 'just typography' ones. In fact I'd rather you ditch all the typography altogether and just draw some things *without* words. That would be really cool.
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quister on Sep 16 '08 Love the type, color and design. The message is a bit too emo for me but a solid 4 for the rest.
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love it, love the colors
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Monkey X on Sep 17 '08 You are def. on the right track.
I think you should study/work with real fonts more often to get more knowhow about how type works -- then experiment like you always do with the handdrawn stuff. Keep them coming. |
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