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Sep 01 '08
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I like this. The first placement would be better. Not the overlap.
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its a great idea. maybe if she was spread out like trying to fly. maybe
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FRICKINAWESOME on Sep 02 '08 I didn't see wings, i thought at first that the woman was trying to paint the world and splashed the final islands and stuff. Ilike the perspective you did and the idea you are going for.
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yeah it looks more like a fish with feathers coming out its mouth to me, maybe make them look more like wings
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I agree... i like the idea but it isn't clear the paint is supposed to be wings...
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You have a nice style, but I thought she puked all over the place when I first saw this. Maybe not green.
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I didn't see the wings until I read your description. Really like the idea though.
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They were finger-painted in a fit of passion :) They aren't supposed to look like real wings, you're supposed to think a little bit.
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whoa, they're wings?
i thought she'd been shot and wiped (green) blood all over the wall. |
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Hey, whatever works for you. Except the fish, not so much...
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26 days later
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I agree with all the other folks - maybe not green. If your intent is to make it not look intentionally like wings, then maybe you could choose a blue or gray or yellow - even red. But the green is kind of an odd color and doesn't look quite right. That said, I absolutely love the design and it's very quirky to have it done in a "comic book" style like you did.
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474 days later
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i feel like the green just isn't the right color for this, the shirt also isnt either. But man great concept and beautiful drawing i would just change it a little more and figure out a different placement! check out mine if you can.http://www.threadless.com/critique/60104/iHuman
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5 colors, two placement possibilities.