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The tie seems weirdly placed for me. And it looks a bit unfinished. I'd work on it a bit more, especially colors, and make it bigger.
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Interesting concept but the perspective is confusing. Work on how to show exactly which direction he is falling.
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i agree with cuteteezrule the perspective is a little confusing
isn't the briefcase heavier than the paper it holds...i dunno... |
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air mail!
Perhaps a little bigger, it's a good start but maybe put some more details into it to clear up the perspective issues? |
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