From me to you.
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1368 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 28 '08
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Average score:
2.22 from 1,250 votes
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ginetteginette on Aug 28 '08 the 'y' is really breaking it up. it would work better if that letter were a rounded Y
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Agree, and the U in you should come up higher so it is easier to read.
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Good concept, would like to see it revamped as suggested above.
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I like the concept, and it's nice typography. I think the Y, O and U should be taller though, because the M and E look very tall since you have the lines descending below them. The Y in general just looks tiny by comparison too, I'm not sure what it is. Maybe adjusting the height and elongating the descender would help. I'm not crazy about the kerning in YOU either, which can't be helped much since it's based on ME and where the lines come from, but I'd like to see the Y less isolated.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 28 '08 Great imagery and simplisticness here, but it's not something i'd pay 15 bucks for. Agree with the suggestions above, and maybe have more colors and a more round-about swilry line before the transformation is made?
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For as simple as this is, it's very compelling. I love the way it hyper-extends. I agree about the round "y" though.
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The joint part of M and J would better if it's round.
Overall it's so simple and nice, BRAVO! |
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A little bigger?
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letters on the bottom are too short
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it's nice.. but a little plain? maybe add some line designs in the background.. or something? :)
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Once again, wonderful typography and design :D
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Love this :-)
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I agree about the "you" having font issues. Needs to be more roundish. taller, etc. Nice design for sure though.
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rounded y, slightly taller u
excellent shirt |
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ginetteginette on Aug 28 '08
the 'y' is really breaking it up. it would work better if that letter were a rounded Y also, the top of the m and e don't even line up. |
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Rounded 'y' and taller 'u' please.
Great idea. |
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dschwen on Sep 02 '08 love the simplicity of your work.
$5. |
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Laser Bread on Sep 02 '08 Your style is fantastic $5
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clever type $5
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i like the idea, i got 5 on it
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Great idea! Maybe a slightly off-center placement on a darker shirt (but still lighter, like light gray or something...)
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Super Idea, just not executed very well.
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The tops of letters are the more easily recognized parts. As such, you should make the bottom letters more recognizable, with a rounded y.
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