If Prince Charming was a Novel
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Aug 18 '08
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Beautyfull
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is she going to be cruched in those gears?
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Hah, no she isn't. The original drawing was in a wheat field, so the gears are old and embedded in the earth. (see how one's broken?)
Also, incase it was confusing, the big shoe in the bottom right hand corner is just a detail, not a giant shoe at the bottom of the Tee... |
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how about some wheat then? =D same color as the dress. i think it would go great along the bases of the gears.
also that bow on the shoulder necessary? v. nice |
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Jellyes on Aug 18 '08 captivating scene!
this is an awesome first submission. I hope you'll be submitting more! |
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Arrow08 on Aug 19 '08 NICE, looks good on the tee!
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^this spamming douche is making me sad :/
rhyot GTFO. |
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If Prince Charming _were_ a novel. But never mind, I know no-one cares about grammar.
thedarrien, I agree with you. |
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Actually, I think both phrases are accurate.
For example, you could say, "If he were a dog" and "if he was a dog" -both make sense gramatically. Though I'll grant you, 'were' sounds slightly more proper, but that doesn't take away from the accuracy of the latter. |
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I think it needs a little bit of wheat or grass around the gears.
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ugly typography
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I agree about adding some earth related ill by the gears. I thought she was going to get crunched, which when you think about the prince charming thing could still be interesting, but also because of the dark tones you used for colouring. It projects an ominous feel.
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Maybe there could be a follow up tee shirt where she gets crunched lol.
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Actually, "were" is the grammatically correct word to use if the described situation is contrary to the truth.
See first response about the subjunctive mood: http://www.englishforums.com/English/UsageOfWereVsWas/gvmb/post.htm |
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this would be so sick if it had the wheat. It would completely changed the mood of the shirt
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4 days later
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Agreed, were a novel.
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