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Pretty Pollution

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Feb 03 '04
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flembo
   flembo on Feb 03 '04
i understand what you're doing here, but the elbows aren't working so much for me.

i like the color palette.
Atomic645
Atomic645 on Feb 03 '04
crazeh
grouchybear
grouchybear on Feb 03 '04
nice illustration, but i don't understand the coloring of the letters. why are P, T, and O that white color?
candyfish
candyfish on Feb 03 '04
Parent Teacher Organization! make it spell something. cute shirt though.
Westbeachgirl
   Westbeachgirl on Feb 03 '04
i dont know why i colored those letters, i just thought it needed some yellow in those spaces. I dont know about the elbows now either?
stockley
stockley on Feb 03 '04
Great Design, love the illustration. I'd buy one.
grouchybear
grouchybear on Feb 03 '04
the color is nice because it adds a little contrast. it seems like it needs more of a reason though. maybe it could be on the letters she is touching, but i don't know if that's any better. play around with it and see what you get. because it's quality.
AntiTheftSecurity
AntiTheftSecurity on Feb 03 '04
its funny how candyfish analyzed the whole PTO situation, and it turns out you just did it to balance things out.



good design. Although that white line isnt too great.
labkid
labkid on Feb 04 '04
looks lite the "right" elbow is a´her other titt...
cesc
cesc on Feb 04 '04
I like the as... I mean the tee. Sure it would be much better without the white floor.

And, by the way, I like your nikname, Westbeachgirl.
deadsumo
deadsumo on Feb 04 '04
ATS!?! you feelin OK today?!?



ANyhoo... bout the shirt. the smoke looks like if it were coming out of a chimney... but its comin out of the ciggie... just weird... puts me off... I'd prefer the smoke to be as seductive as the lady... not that the lady it that seductive with the yellow tipped elbows. + what is that line going across the shirt?!?
Westbeachgirl
   Westbeachgirl on Feb 04 '04
ok thanks for the advice...... it was my first tee so i have took in everything to account and resubmitted it, i think it looks better. should be on tommorow maybe. What was i thinking with those elbows? lol
demonangela
demonangela on Feb 04 '04
Am i losing it. I thought P O and T was colored because it stood for POT aka pretty polution, or so I thought you meants...woops my mistake, i thought it was quite humerous though.
CentrefugeNickel
CentrefugeNickel on Feb 04 '04
That's one of the coolest logos I've seen in a while. I say logos because I feel that could go on just about anything. It's awesome. I'd wear it. Maybe center it though, and the white line's weird. I'll have to see the modified version. Excellent for your first! (Especially compared to my first....)
cesc
cesc on Feb 05 '04
THE CENSORED TEE: http://www.cescgiralt.net/origin_of_what.html

("content deemed inapropiate")
deadsumo
deadsumo on Feb 05 '04
lol @ cesc! Mine was also censored... it had a warning sign with words: WARNING: extremely high on drugs. Lookin forward to seeing more westbeachgirl designs...
pirateking
pirateking on Feb 05 '04
I really like it- although it could do without the line on the bottom. ^^
Westbeachgirl
   Westbeachgirl on Feb 05 '04
ok new one is out http://www.threadless.com/submission/17524.html. a lot better

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