Underwater Ride
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1382 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 14 '08
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32 comments
Average score:
2.41 from 1,109 votes
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interesting idea. a little far fetched but i like the art work :)
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The tan is awesome.
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ivejustquitsmoking on Aug 14 '08 Very interesting visual pun and artsy execution! 5$ for the tan
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I'd wear it on tan because I LOVE rollercoasters...but I don't get it...what exactly is the "visual pun"?
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i think the pun is cute, but the colours are horrible. neither of them would look very flattering.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 14 '08 This isn't a visual pun supertroooper, it's just a rollercoaster evolving into a seahorse, unless I'M missing something! lol. I like the idea, but the seahorse is a bit too thick linewise as compared to the rest of the piece and the transition from coaster to seahorse needs to be a bit smoother. This has a lot of potential tho, nice work.
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well... thanks for the comments.
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bump!!!
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KDLIG on Aug 15 '08 pretty unique style!
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bedtime bump!
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that's pretty neat!
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pretty
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Awesome 5!
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Really like the seahorse and the colors. Not sure about the placement.
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this is pretty cool.
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i think this is AWESOME. i love it.
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cool drawing :)
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Nice one!!
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tan tan tan tan!!!!!!!!!!!
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rollercoaster and the seahorse stuff looks fabulous togerther... well 5!
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Sweeet design!
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Totally love it on sand!
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I love the colors and the skatchy mode
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Great, especially as I'm crazy about seahorses! The design placed low works for this one, but not for me- I'm a tuck-it-in t shirt type :)
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definitely $5
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scenerie on Aug 20 '08 I like this - it feels like a surreal dream.
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Thank you! :)
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oh, very cool! like it on the gold!
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B 7 on Aug 20 '08 This is amazing
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quister on Aug 21 '08 Terrific idea, very eye catching, a bit rough on the line work though, the transition from sea horse to coaster is too abrupt, the lines of each should be the same thickness maybe. Anyway, the idea is solid. 4
Onari, this is only your second sub so, you might not know that bumping doesn't do anything on a score page, it just works in the blogs and critique. Good luck |
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Umm, would not the slimmer lines of the ferris wheel/roller coaster just signify that they are further away then the seahorse?
I really like this on gold best. Score: 5 for sure. |
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Thank you so much for your time :)
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Arrow08 on Aug 22 '08 nice hand drawn style!
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