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:)))
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I don't think the text is neccesary but I like it otherwise
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cute $4
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I like it without the green stuff!
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you do know you misspelled "heros" right....
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i dont really get what you mean with the text... but i LOVE the concept & the illo!
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ditch the text and the green thing, it looks better with just batman on a scooter.
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Misspelling.. and I agree, ditch the text. Or it would make better sense if it said something like 'Batman goes green'
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I dont think it really works
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ivejustquitsmoking on Aug 13 '08 cute!
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i like swrt83's suggestion, actually...
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FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 13 '08 Or maybe even have a sign that has a batmobile and a cross through it like "NO PARKING" and Batman skating away from it, like his batmobile was towed. Or even show it being towed, i think that might be easier to understand than him going green.
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I like it but the slogan in green doesn't seem right. Also I think you misspelled heroes. I'd buy it without the green part.
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Bisparulz on Aug 14 '08 huhu 5$
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it's funny! batman on the scooter is nice idea! But green part is could be better:) but it's good!
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vintz on Aug 15 '08 thanks for your coments! what do you think about: "heroes goes green" that's right?
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herky on Aug 15 '08 awesome character
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The concept is nice, but work on the execution. I don't get the batmobile being pulled vs. super 'heros' (sic) clean. Maybe something like 'batkickscooter - 0 mpg'.
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it would be better if you had the bat car being pulled away full sized or not at all
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Nice..I would locate the print on bottom left corner$$$
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Lose the text, then it's great.
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Arrow08 on Aug 17 '08 nice expression on batman
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The text confuses me a little (especially since you misspelled "heroes"), but Batman on a scooter isn't a good enough shirt to fly on its own.
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I think the text is confusing, but if you put the car being towed as a thought bubble that would work for me.
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I like the consept, not the display so much. The text doesn't flow.
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eh. the text takes away from the funny illustration
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def lose the text
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5$ without the green stuff
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Yeah, ditch the text. Otherwise, i like it
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quister on Aug 19 '08 The characterization is fabulous. The message is a bit obscure. 4
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It would be 'heroes go green' (not goes) but ... then you'd need more than one hero. I think you have a good idea but it needs more work, along the lines of suggestions from brunonery and frickinawesome.
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i think that if you would like the text (cause it is kinda cute ^_^) i would put it on the back of the shirt so i doesn't pull away from the main design on the front, it's a really awesome idea!
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