This Be My Tee
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1387 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 08 '08
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31 comments
Average score:
1.90 from 1,164 votes
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This is a reworking of my first design. hope you like it.
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i think its great :D
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Demented on Aug 08 '08 Love it
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who's a clever boy ; )
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i like this drawing but i dunno if the colours are right, or if it looks that good on a tee. sorry mang.
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cheers for the comments.
any feedback is great. joel |
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Different tee color maybe? Khaki...? I can't think of a good one off the top of my head, but tee color is really easy to change.
The design is great! |
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ginetteginette on Aug 08 '08 i think it's the placement that bothers me the most, if this were printed exactly like your placement shows i think the words would be hidden under our arms most of the time.
it might even be best completely without the text, your image could definitely stand alone. |
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I like the placement but the lime green, not so much. Maybe try a navy blue
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Aphte on Aug 09 '08 Yeah ! Drawing-only text-free ! Glugluglu.
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All Pirates know they should not be holding their sword like that
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Your illustration style & color palette is dope! but I dont think you need the text or maybe it should say something else
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Awesome!
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jean_warhol on Aug 09 '08 nice. i like your style
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cheers for all the comments.
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i'm liking at this. 5$
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Your lettering is really cool but I think I'd like the design better without the text.
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shame, the lettering was my favourite part.
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Great!
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whirzle1 on Aug 10 '08 I like the style, but the placement - I think - is too far to the side. I don't think you'll be able to see it. I would also agree with losing the text. I'm personally not a fan of my shirt referencing itself. And to be REALLY nitpick-y, I wish the guy didn't just cut off/stop.
That said - I like your shading and detail. |
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cheers whirzle. you might be right about the placement. maybe his body should go all the way down to the bottom of the shirt. what do you think?
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Lose the text and you got a sale.
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I love this. I love the choice of colors. Although you might want to be careful about losing the text in the armpit. I like the text, though; if it were my design I'd keep it.
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heeheehee, this is coool! i'd certainly wear it - the artwork is fantastic. have to agree with the comments about text and placement though. i think the text is good, but it'd be better if it were placed more subtly. but yes, whirzle's opinion about placement is pretty fair.
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this is really good!
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Hate it
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cheers sacha, nice constructive criticism.
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Neato!
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I'll like to see it in a black t-shirt
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Really Nice.
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thanks for all the comments.
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Such nice comments but only a score of 1.9
oh well I'll try again. check out my hew design http://www.threadless.com/submission/174429/Use_it_or_lose_it joel |
18 days later
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Very cool again I think you have your own style love it!
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I would have left the text or message off, though
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