what happened when the hunter will shoot the deer. Here we are, hope you like it ;P

Kind of confusing to me, too busy, too much going on. The moon feels rushed. I do like the black on blue on black -- and the trees.

uhhh.... try again?

a lot of your other stuff seems so much cleaner and well thought out

id like this better if the two jokes in this weren't on the same shirt. deer + moose sign = funny. hunter shooting deer crossing sign = sort of funny. all together it is confusing and not funny. 2

best english number one make a sense!

This is confusing, and it looks like the deer is mounting the moose.

That's right mr. hunter, you show that sign deer that inter-species beastiality is wrong no matter how fictional!

There is too much going on. You don't need the cross hairs, you don't need the deer in the background and you don't need the plastic wrap filter on the deer. A silhouette is supposed to be flat, adding dimension to the deer silhouette seems awkward.

The sign is funny, that is what works for your design. I recommend removing everything that does not enhance the sign.

thank you for some advice, i will keep it and wait for other response :)