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Submitted on:
Aug 04 '08
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Comments:
29 comments
Final average score:
1.73 out of 5
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Jellyes
About my design
by Jellyes
The eyes that paralyze~

Hey, this is my first submission on threadless. It's evolved quite a bit thanks to critiques, and I'm really pleased with the final result.

It's pretty abstract, but totally original, so I hope you guys like it. Thanks for voting, and stuff.
NocturnalDaze
NocturnalDaze on Aug 04 '08
Something about the size relation bugs me. It's a neat concept, but it seems like the hand should be larger than the eyes.

maybe partially infront of.
ktuttle2005
ktuttle2005 on Aug 04 '08
it turned out great! braaaaaaavo
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 04 '08
I've modified it a little since I submitted this; made the hand a little larger because it looks because and scooted it over. I'll post it in a minute~
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 04 '08
http://img329.imageshack.us/my.php?image=craigblack2zu3.png

...yeah.
Thanks for the votes and feedback, hope you guys like it.
Hiresdes
Hiresdes on Aug 04 '08
FUCKING AWESOME
Robsoul
   Robsoul on Aug 04 '08
I think it's cool and the size of the hands or face needed to be adjusted to be more proportional. even from your latest update, the proportion of the face/eyes still needs to be smaller

dig it
HAHA.sg
   HAHA.sg on Aug 04 '08
something wrong with the size, anyway cool idea.
keep it up. (:
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 05 '08
I'm so reluctant to make the hand any bigger 'cause I think it makes it look goofy.

http://img361.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bignessoa9.png

?!1/1!?

If I make it any bigger it makes the hand the focus of the piece and the eyes seem minimally important:(

Also thanks for the positive feedback & stuff. :)
somerandomhobo
somerandomhobo on Aug 05 '08
you could make the eyes slightly smaller and keep the hand the same. I think you'd still retain focus on the eyes
ninety
ninety on Aug 06 '08
agreed about the proportion, but still nice work! this is good stuff, hope to see more from you :)
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 06 '08
Do you guys mean like this?

http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bignesscd7.png

I think that looks weird, but I have bias against the one I submitted, so I'll trust you. haha.

And my next few ideas are in the works, I'll probably be submitting a few more sometime soon;p
UTdrumbum
UTdrumbum on Aug 06 '08
i think you should scrap this idea
Saba-daba-dueiro
Saba-daba-dueiro on Aug 06 '08
star over.
celticfan345
celticfan345 on Aug 06 '08
i like it
Shaner.C
Shaner.C on Aug 06 '08
I think its cool. To be so critical of the size is just nitpicking.
thedarrien
thedarrien on Aug 07 '08
niiice. I like it scooted over and bigger, looks great.
CuteTeezRule
CuteTeezRule on Aug 07 '08
The size of the eyes is like in a comic book when you zoom in to the eyes and then move onto the action so to me it reads like that.
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 07 '08
haha, I hope that's a compliment?

thanks thedarrien & everyone else:p
phones
phones on Aug 08 '08
$5
phones
phones on Aug 08 '08
i like the eyes BIG. i don't think it looks out of proportion- if anything it becomes more of an exaggerated close-up akin to the comic book style. it also balances out the design imo.
JW
   JW on Aug 08 '08
This is a competent first submission, well done!
hahakim
hahakim on Aug 08 '08
sorry. dont get it at all. not for me.
MirageOfMadness
MirageOfMadness on Aug 08 '08
The eyes look better when they are larger. Since they are framed to communicate a close-up, they need to be exactly that. I would actually suggest experimenting with the placement and size of the hand/watch. Overall, an interesting idea!
Badconvictions
Badconvictions on Aug 08 '08
i think we are all pretentious
quister
   quister on Aug 09 '08
Great first sub. Interesting, attention getting, and nicely rendered. 4

Looking forward to more.
VillainOfTheYear
VillainOfTheYear on Aug 10 '08
Is it just me or can anyone else see the watch swaying? Do I need sleep? Great design, I'm not sure why but I really like it alot!
Larlar
Larlar on Aug 10 '08
Stop modifying it. The original you submitted looks the best. $5
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 11 '08
last chance to vote!
thanks everyone!
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 11 '08
hahaha, 1.73.


:(
Larlar
Larlar on Aug 11 '08
Totally undeserving, sorry man.
6 days later
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Aug 17 '08
Drugs are for losers and hypnosis is for losers with big weird eyebrows.
Jellyes
Jellyes on Aug 17 '08
this has nothing to do with drugs!
and his eyebrows are normal sized. : ( just a li'l bushy.
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Aug 18 '08
You're not a Futurama fan, are ya? I like your design. I was just commenting on how accurate your depiction of a hypnotist was as you included the big weird eyebrows.
2 days later
HAHA.sg
   HAHA.sg on Aug 20 '08
keep up the good work dude!
(;
tigrillonc
tigrillonc on Aug 20 '08
thanks for your comment and your honesty
you have a cool design here... i don't love it personally but seems like lots of work behind
8 days later
matteomac
matteomac on Aug 29 '08
I like it, it's underrated... 1.73 is too little!
106 days later
mobii
mobii on Dec 13 '08
I like the proportions the way they are...if you made them relative, then it would just be another "guy on a tee".
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