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Something about the size relation bugs me. It's a neat concept, but it seems like the hand should be larger than the eyes.
maybe partially infront of. |
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I've modified it a little since I submitted this; made the hand a little larger because it looks because and scooted it over. I'll post it in a minute~
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http://img329.imageshack.us/my.php?image=craigblack2zu3.png
...yeah. Thanks for the votes and feedback, hope you guys like it. |
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I think it's cool and the size of the hands or face needed to be adjusted to be more proportional. even from your latest update, the proportion of the face/eyes still needs to be smaller
dig it |
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you could make the eyes slightly smaller and keep the hand the same. I think you'd still retain focus on the eyes
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The size of the eyes is like in a comic book when you zoom in to the eyes and then move onto the action so to me it reads like that.
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i like the eyes BIG. i don't think it looks out of proportion- if anything it becomes more of an exaggerated close-up akin to the comic book style. it also balances out the design imo.
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Is it just me or can anyone else see the watch swaying? Do I need sleep? Great design, I'm not sure why but I really like it alot!
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You're not a Futurama fan, are ya? I like your design. I was just commenting on how accurate your depiction of a hypnotist was as you included the big weird eyebrows.
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thanks for your comment and your honesty
you have a cool design here... i don't love it personally but seems like lots of work behind |
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I like the proportions the way they are...if you made them relative, then it would just be another "guy on a tee".
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Hey, this is my first submission on threadless. It's evolved quite a bit thanks to critiques, and I'm really pleased with the final result.
It's pretty abstract, but totally original, so I hope you guys like it. Thanks for voting, and stuff.