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This is my first submission. I thought this idea was cute, a chubby, old-timey windmill wishing she could be a fancy, new, skinny windmill. Thanks to those who helped in crit!
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The idea isn't too bad, but the design could use some work. Maybe it would look better without the faces?
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well, maybe get rid of the faces and clean up the design some...less cartoony and less trying to be cute.
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I think you need to work on it at a higher resolution. Even in the small close-up of the windmill's face the pixelation is evident.
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