Improbable Energy
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1410 days ago
Submitted on:
Jul 18 '08
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Average score:
1.91 from 1,058 votes
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i would elaborate on the bottom part of the bulb (the metal part). detail that a little more! the eel is so beautiful looking, but the bulb itself feels really forced. the bottom of that bulb would really bring this together (in my opinion).
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ginetteginette on Jul 18 '08 the metal part also seems really short in relation to the bulb
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nice to see it here :) $5
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 18 '08 Man this is creepatorium.
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This is such a neat idea, and wonderfully illustrated. Good job! I love it!
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more eels on shirts!
nice idea, beautiful eel drawing. good luck |
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Yup, just extend the metal part of the lightbulb a bit. really nice illo.
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Thanks for the comments guys! Keep 'em coming. :)
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i agree about adding detail to the bottom of the bulb... also, is the shape of the bulb the standard shape? i thought it looked a little funny, but if i'm the only one, nevermind... but i thought bulbs were skinnier around the filament...
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This makes me think of the altoid commercial about using an eel to send messages with dots and dashes. I like this though, the only thing is the threads of the bulb does need to be taller. IRL its usually about 1-1.5" in length. The way you have it draw it would be more like .5" Overall though, it is very nice.
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I love the concept.
If the glowy part was hand-drawn it would be better though. |
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cool concept but the art and coloring could use some work. I would prefer more lightbulb detail, a hand drawn glow, and cleaner lines on the eel. (not coloring in the lines has its place, but it looks sloppy here) 5 anyway for the idea
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Nice.
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like that glow
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quister on Jul 24 '08 Great concept, needs a bit more work on the drawing. Terrific 1st sub. Looking forward to more from you. 4
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Thanks for all the scores/comments guys!
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