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R-Kelly meets Paul Rand

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Jul 15 '08
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by routchy
After the Milton Glazer's ones (talking about his worlwide famous "I LOVE NY") it's time to make some reinterpretation of Paul Rand's designs.

EYE BEE LIVE EYE CAN FLY!!! After EYE BEE M for IBM.

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pocketrebel
pocketrebel on Jul 16 '08
live? You need to use "leave."
squatterjohn
squatterjohn on Jul 16 '08
I don't think the picture even represents "live" very well. Looks more like "sing" or something.
DrJKL
DrJKL on Jul 16 '08
Perhaps a Leaf?
xgurl3eb
xgurl3eb on Jul 16 '08
I definitely thought it was "I bee sing I can fly" which makes no sense, i like the idea, but you need a better representation for believe, i agree with DrJKL, bee + leaf = believe
tesco
   tesco on Jul 16 '08
leaf would be SO much better, I can even picture what the Rand-esque leaf would look like
mighty_thor
mighty_thor on Jul 16 '08
I concur with the majority. The singing scene is no good. A leaf is needed.
cameron kim jones
cameron kim jones on Jul 16 '08
I concur that. And a clipping path around your guy up there. Less flash please.
steven218
   steven218 on Jul 16 '08
is it wrong that i'm not a fan of paul rand?



the guy just never did it for me.
routchy
routchy on Jul 16 '08
It's Okay, I'll put another one with a leaf instead of a "live".. I thought that it could sound no good too but was waiting for some reactions.. I'm french so.. excuse me.

In fact I was expecting more comments.. I'll see the score if people enjoy it anyway..

It's could be taken as a graphic designer's private joke but the sentence makes it more popular I guess..

anyway, I will re-do it.

Thanks for those comments.
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routchy
routchy on Aug 18 '08
I'm so sad I can't add my new version of this one.. Threadless!!!
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