This is actually an insanely unique and cool attempt on the shirt within a shirt within an etc idea, with the person wearing it being the final head! The colors of each piece together throw it all off a bit, as does the strange shape of the heads piled on top of one another. Maybe straighten the heads up to be more up/down repeating and have some more colors that compliment one another and you've got a 5$ fo sho from me.
About my design
T-shirt in 6 colors, normal ink or suede ink.