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Deelzbabe
In the style of Alfons Mucha.
caleb haws
caleb haws on Jul 03 '08
If you're gonna put a naked lady on a shirt like that, you gotta go all the way. Which you didn't.
vivalacynthia
vivalacynthia on Jul 03 '08
Yeah, I prefer the bust (no pun intended--really) in the upper left. I think that works better than the chest up view.
olbeardy
olbeardy on Jul 03 '08
Alphonse Mucha is one of my all-time favorites and your take on his style with a modern woman is beautiful. The illustration is flawless but the design as a whole seems like it is not yet resolved. I would push the Mucha thing more by using his background ornaments and cool framing but maybe you could modernize that a bit as well by what shapes you choose. This shirt will be totally kick ass if you treat the whole tee with the same commitment that you put into the woman. You're amazing.
Dimplez Gurl
Dimplez Gurl on Jul 03 '08
I personally like this shirt.
It's not to busy, and it doesnt look like everything else people are designing there days.
So in other words, its fresh.

I likw it. Good job. =]
Anikat
Anikat on Jul 03 '08
I like this a LOT. But call me a little biased. Hehehee.
keziaofiesh
keziaofiesh on Jul 03 '08
The face is great, but the body is really flat - there's no shadows or anything. It doesn't need much, but maybe what should have happened was have that right arm reach across to her other shoulder or something.

Awesome work on her head though and the hair, it's really pretty.
Kookaberry
Kookaberry on Jul 03 '08
55378008
fumofumo
fumofumo on Jul 04 '08
I like it a lot, but I think it might look better on grey tee ^^
lob4star
lob4star on Jul 04 '08
i like it a lot ($5) i would put a shirt or something like that on her, but i really like the fact that its not rude in any way, nice one.
moosemousse
moosemousse on Jul 04 '08
It's very elegant and the colors are great. Ou sont les boobs?
stephannieexT
stephannieexT on Jul 04 '08
its beautiful. itd lookk rlly nice on a blackk shirt
ilovestuf
ilovestuf on Jul 04 '08
her face is really pretty...she reminds me of jem from jem and the holograms!

i would like it better if it were just the head on the shirt...no bust section.
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Jul 05 '08
its well drawn and vaguely mucha-esque but it needs more teh bust alone doesnt make an interesting shirt. like olbeardy said take some more of mucha's elements to add to this. also as others have noted teh body needs definition why do teh face and hair so well if youre only going to leave teh body unfinished?
abbyill
abbyill on Jul 05 '08
*humps screen*

You can probably assume who this is, POOKIE! :D
Goldendust
Goldendust on Jul 05 '08
It needs much more mucha. You're on the right track.
monique catastrophic
monique catastrophic on Jul 05 '08
owww i really like this lol
SnakeEls
SnakeEls on Jul 05 '08
She really looks like Audrey Kitching (http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x216/CM_Pinkk/Audrey%20Kitching/AudreyKitching16.jpg). I like the tee only I would prefer the female to wear some clothes.
ckyrckr
ckyrckr on Jul 05 '08
i love your design style but i would agree it needs something more and i would like it also if she was wearing clothes.
Purple Max
Purple Max on Jul 05 '08
she's beautiful. where's the rest?
Malcolm Man
Malcolm Man on Jul 05 '08
she's titless.
Monster Mind
Monster Mind on Jul 06 '08
HOT & SEXY!!!!! dude
StephStorm
StephStorm on Jul 06 '08
Yeah she looks like Audrey Kitching to me too
reecharded
reecharded on Jul 06 '08
beautifull
the body is flat tho
mic-o
mic-o on Jul 06 '08
its pretty good i thing it would look even better on a black or grey shirt
Twiggyhall
Twiggyhall on Jul 06 '08
Jem, Jah-em is truly outrageous! Truly, truly, truly outrageous!!!!
RAWR.its.sarah
RAWR.its.sarah on Jul 06 '08
uber beautiful (:
MrSleepyPenguin
MrSleepyPenguin on Jul 06 '08
Its not porn, only "artistic nudity" ^_^ Very good design, but add some shadows, not so much its overkill, just enough so it doesnt look like a flat drawing
lunchboxbrain
lunchboxbrain on Jul 07 '08
the illo is well done but it doesn't do anything for me as a tee. 3
moosabman
moosabman on Jul 07 '08
Its a nice illustration but the half boobs are kinda freaking me out.
wombatgal
wombatgal on Jul 07 '08
olbeardy is totally right. It needs more... Mucha-ness. I'd love to see some modern ornamentation in Mucha's style, maybe something technological.
Either keep it as a bust (like in the top left) or do some sort of swoopy, modern wrap dress in Mucha's style.
This is an amazing idea though and I really can't wait to see how you develop it! Mucha's one of my favorite artists.
mlnewco
mlnewco on Jul 07 '08
I like the illustration, but as some of the above have said, would like to see more work/detail on the body
IAmAMonster
IAmAMonster on Jul 08 '08
Yeah, it's weird that there aren't any ... parts. I mean, it would be weird if they were there too, but yeah..

She's gorgeous though.
Raphe10
Raphe10 on Jul 08 '08
she has no nipples
:[
poor thing
Krimson
Krimson on Jul 08 '08
good illustration, not doing it as a design for me quite yet, needs background garnishments perhaps, something to lead the viewer across the shirt. Also, either go for breasts or don't, otherwise it looks like she is wearing a skin-body suit, and that is weird.
adstmh
adstmh on Jul 09 '08
I actually love this design.

Would definitely buy it $5
skeev
skeev on Jul 09 '08
It looks good but the lack of breasts makes this look more like a man with pink hair. Unless that's what you were going for...
Novikoff
Novikoff on Jul 10 '08
this is other style. It is "pop" style. Not modern or art-nouvo
Rathany
Rathany on Jul 10 '08
To all you no-boobie whiners:

Maybe it's not a girl?
Anataya
Anataya on Jul 10 '08
Wow, this is nothing like Alphonse Mucha's work.
You at least need to add in spaghetti hair and make it more curly and wavy.
More ornamentation is needed too, a lot more.
If you're going to mimick what he did then you should research his work more.
bobobob1230
bobobob1230 on Jul 10 '08
if you are going to put breasts, you need nipples. Don't censor yourself.
Deelzbabe
Deelzbabe on Jul 10 '08
Thank you everyone for all your comments. One thing however has been bothering me. All the complaints about the lack of boobs. I think girls with smaller boobs are more aesthetically pleasing to eye. Also I was going for a more simplistic approach to her bust area, if you look at some of Mucha's work he tends to put more shading and detail into the face rather than the rest of the body(not clothes).

As for the nipple part, I didn't want to put it in. In reality I didn't want to bring attention to the fact that she is nude. I wanted the eye to gravitate towards her face, which is why I left the rest of her body/bust plain and unshaded, but I will change that now. I love my design and stand by it, although I realize that not everyone sees my design the way I do(did).

However all your critiques are always welcome. Now I know what to fix. Thank you for all of your input.

P.S. But to some of the people who left less savory comments, I think you should either keep those types of comments to yourself, and also try not to focus so much on a girl's breasts and rather look up towards her face.
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