More twisted artsy stuff

Sorry but it looks kind of stagnant. The design is sort of suspended and I think the red part around the design makes it look disconnected from the shirt.

although i reaaly like the idea! Just my personal opinion

i saw your other submission. i like that one better cause it's not so cluttered in one place. but maybe it could be bigger

i saw your other submission. i like that one better cause it's not so cluttered in one place. but maybe it could be bigger