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Head Stuck in the Clouds

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Jul 02 '08
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joyscola

About my design

by joyscola
My mother always tells me that I need to get my head out of the clouds and I usually respond with, "I can't, it's stuck."
JohnFarallo
JohnFarallo on Jul 02 '08
Nice concept I like it a lot

please critique my design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22318/hello_geisha

joyscola
joyscola on Jul 02 '08
I'm so glad you like it! Thank you.



She's actualy in the sky so therefore there's no place for a shadow to fall on. Thank you for the recomendation though. =D
smilen8
smilen8 on Jul 03 '08
i think she means shadowing in the cloud. but still...good idea.
joyscola
joyscola on Jul 03 '08
Ohhh.... I see. I never thought of doing that, that's very clever. =D If I get a chance to add to the design I will try doing that. lol. Thank you! :]
Mamma bear
Mamma bear on Jul 03 '08
I love it.......and it is just how I always imagine you bouncin' around in the clouds and now you really are....lol....I love it and I love you!
joyscola
joyscola on Jul 03 '08
Aaaww... Thank you!!! =D
elsuperfreak
elsuperfreak on Jul 03 '08
cool!!!

check my design if you wanna...
Monkey III
   Monkey III on Jul 03 '08
Nice work ^^
joyscola
joyscola on Jul 03 '08
*dance* Thank you ever so much! =D
Artm8ker
Artm8ker on Jul 03 '08
Very Cool. I think we've all been there at one time or another. Plus, the air is nice up there.
TeeforTots
TeeforTots on Jul 03 '08
shes really got a good grip on that cloud :) haha nice concept.
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Jul 03 '08
Dude it's really uncool to spam other people's designs with requests to vote on yours. You can blog about your design if you want to advertise it. I'm just telling you this before you get some really nasty comments because people do NOT like it.
SoulfumeInc
SoulfumeInc on Jul 03 '08
^'s true
joyscola
joyscola on Jul 03 '08
SORRY TO EVERYONE THAT HAS COME ACROSS MY DESIGN DUE TO THE FACT THAT I LEFT A LINK IN A COMMENT TO MY SUBMISSION!!



It won't happen again, I promise. I'm new to this site, it's my first submission and I noticed a couple other people were doing it so I figured it was ok.



Again, I'm sorry.
Cici
Cici on Jul 03 '08
nice idea but a little too simple
Lyocell
Lyocell on Jul 03 '08
congratulations from your mam...how sweet is that?! cool.



I like the idea and the drawing style...just btw I got two designs ;o) that have pretty much the same style. In my opinion I would draw the second arm too. Like the first arm just at the right site.



joyscola
joyscola on Jul 03 '08
You know that is an excellent idea!! Thank you so, so much! =D I will definitely add that in there if I get a chance touch up the design. It'll totally complete the picture. Wow. Thank you! =D
halix
halix on Jul 03 '08
Great concept (similar to my design hehe)

I´m agree about the arm, I think it would be better if she was holding the cloud with both arms.
asfi235
asfi235 on Jul 03 '08
I knocked a point off my score for spamming. Please don't do it.



I realise you apologised but it needed to be said nonetheless, for the benefit of other newcomers.



joyscola
joyscola on Jul 04 '08
To: asfi235.



Hahahaha! Wow.
joyscola
joyscola on Jul 04 '08
To: halix.



Thank you so much! =D



Though I'm not quite sure I see the resembalence...
Lyocell
Lyocell on Jul 04 '08
your are welcome. looking forward to see the new versions.



thanks for telling me what OCD means :o)
TattooedBear
TattooedBear on Jul 04 '08
SPAM!!!
Dinosauria
Dinosauria on Jul 05 '08
Pity this is over, I never got the chance to score it!
impact561
impact561 on Jul 05 '08
I love this one. You were robbed :(



Please Vote Rocket World
joyscola
joyscola on Jul 06 '08
Aaaww... thank you! That's the sweetest thing anyone has said about it. You're amazing. Thank you. =D
impact561
impact561 on Jul 07 '08
joyscola is someone I collaborate with.
impact561
impact561 on Jul 07 '08
"Want to" Collaborate with.
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Orangenotes
Orangenotes on Jul 09 '08
nice and simple! I like it..:)
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MCosta
MCosta on Nov 18 '08
(didn't read all the comments above, hope I'm not repeating anyone's)

I think the upper body needs a different pose, to be easier to understand. If the legs are facing forward the body could too. Having the upper body turned to one side just hinders it.



I like the idea, I think it just needs a better execution. Then I would buy it.
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