http://chank.com/freefont_detail.php?sku=1070 is a freeware font for anyone to use; never saw it on a tee before. Why don´t you stand up to the plate, kembrew and show us some moves, instead of wasting our time pointing fingers?
Ivan: who says you have to be an excellent t-shirt designer to be a critic? Film critics don't direct or write scripts, why should this be much different. Remember, you are trying to get people to buy this.
pink shirt: ick.
design around text: kind of nifty. a little bland.
text: when i first joined here i recall seeing the comment on some submission.. "anyone can put text on a t-shirt." spice it up somehow. make us interested. use pictures to say what you're trying to get the words to do. also, that font is doing nothing for me.