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I like the Rules: idea at the top.
Then maybe the scribbles could be a little less bold, so you could make out some of the words. |
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I like the concept, but I wouldn't know what it was addressing if it wasn't part of this contest. Maybe if it actually said something about rules? To me it looks like a scribbled out list.
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if you look at the black one it looks like a bunch of lit ciggs or blunts or whatever you kids call em
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The first thing i thought is that it needs the word "RULES" above it to make any sense, and i see others thought that as well so you might wanna consider it. Other than that, it's a fun idea.
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maybe it should have rules written at the top and number 10 not crossed out, then people will understand it more.
apart from that this top is awesome!! |
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it would be like a secret agent's tee, when lomographers meet lomographers we would knew each other by telling from this tee!
whoever wearing this walking on street would be lovers of Lomography! |
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