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i definitely like the drawing better than just the hand on the shirt.
The sunset adds something... 5 though. good job! |
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I'd like it better if it were a little bigger, or if the shirt was something other than white. Still lovely though.
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I want to see it fleshed out in color, too. Sketches can make good shirts, but in this case it looks incomplete. Awesome design though.
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this is a really cool idea... but this still looks like a sketch to me.... as in, a drawing you do to help you execute the final piece. it just doesn't look finished to me.
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This is certainly something here... Maybe tweak it a bit and run it through critiques, but with talent like this you might be able to churn out a winner if you keep working at it!
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thank you, caleb haws to have taken my defence,
but what does not kill to me, make me stronger ;) I accept criticism, thank you with all !! |
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SUCKAFREECITY
your opinion do not have any importance when it is known that you did not still propose any project, the day when it will be done I prevents while waiting abstain you! |
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You definately should have included the sunset and the water on the shirt. If it is there then ignore me and hope i die a horrible death.
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