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Wrong backpack

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Jun 24 '08
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by Fat Mouse
Hi!

This is my first submission on Threadless, my design its about a sky diver who took his kid backpack instead of a parachute.

I hope you enjoy this and...aa..please hit me with some comments,

Thanks
abdlkarim
abdlkarim on Jun 24 '08
very funny and cool and wearable.

my only critique is that the clouds looks like intestines...
Pave Meant
Pave Meant on Jun 24 '08
It's so cute, but I wish it had color!
brittamer
brittamer on Jun 24 '08
this is great, color and all. my only thing is the way the right foot is behind the cloud. perspective feels a little off, maybe its just me though
brittamer
brittamer on Jun 24 '08
and by right foot, i mean his right
bsmana
   bsmana on Jun 24 '08
great idea!
CatililahAYAY27
CatililahAYAY27 on Jun 24 '08
Pretty sweet idea but the graphics are kinda lacking, I think.
danterushdan
danterushdan on Jun 24 '08
LOL i like it, i think the graphics are perfect. I like that the right foot is behind the cloud, i think it's funny.
EricDiaz
EricDiaz on Jun 25 '08
Any relation to FlyingMouse?!
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Jun 25 '08
I thought this was Flying Mouse for a second but then questioned it because FM said he was taking a break from this place! Still, nice work here color-wise, I'm just not a huge fan of the execution of the sky-diving not at all being upset at his current parachute-less predicament. Also, one of the small clouds is cut and pasted, but nice first design and keep submitting please!
Harfangoria
Harfangoria on Jun 25 '08
YAS PLZ $5
walmazan
   walmazan on Jun 25 '08
great and awesome frist sub! $5
Mountain Gnome
Mountain Gnome on Jun 25 '08
Great First Sub! Well Done! 5!
Fat Mouse
Fat Mouse on Jun 25 '08
Hey guys, thanks for your comments,

EricDiaz- no, no relation with FlyingMouse, but i will like to meet him :)

About the cloud over his leg, i wanted to give the idea that the skydiver is in the clouds not just some clouds in the back (maybe was not a good idea ;) )
--_
--_ on Jun 25 '08
nice.
StephStorm
StephStorm on Jun 25 '08
Haha. Love it.
MacKenzie24
MacKenzie24 on Jun 26 '08
I agree that the cloud over his leg doesn't look very good. I like the color of the 'sky' blue, and I love your first submission!
check status
check status on Jun 26 '08
haha!
chlorinator
chlorinator on Jun 26 '08
cool idea, but i'd say foot in front of the cloud, and i wish the clouds were all unique
Gazza7
Gazza7 on Jun 26 '08
hmm

the teddy bear looks a bit out of place for me

agree about the foot in frount of the cloud

otherwise its very cool
SMFT
SMFT on Jun 27 '08
Couldn't tell it was a backpack, or supposed to be a parachute.
WheezyTo
WheezyTo on Jun 27 '08
I like the color.
jayrawz
   jayrawz on Jun 28 '08
haha.. i didnt get it rite away until i saw the title and then i laughed out loud.. hilarious
pici
pici on Jun 30 '08
Great work. I like it very much. 5!
alyxss
alyxss on Jun 30 '08
i like it, though the clouds do look like intestines...
ManekiGrace
ManekiGrace on Jun 30 '08
hey...cool
shupashups
shupashups on Jun 30 '08
great idea, but shouldn't the guy look a bit more scared?

I also agrea with everyone about the feet and the clouds...

just a little bit of work and it will be perfect.
Fat Mouse
Fat Mouse on Jul 01 '08
Hey! thanks everyone for votes and comments , i agree with you now about the cloud over his leg and i will modify :)

About the scare look ...hmmm..let's say he didn't realize yet :)
hyperhyphen
hyperhyphen on Jul 01 '08
great idea

Nice first sub, you got the skills 5
buyteesnet
buyteesnet on Jul 01 '08
amazing style - very Tin tin - clouds are kinda scary?
13 days later
phuel
phuel on Jul 15 '08
clever and completed like a pro.
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